Eleanor Rigby

This is awesome, I really enjoyed it! Personally, I'm a huge fan of any poetry that is free verse, and you've created an awesome style for yourself that flows so ...

Note: This is the first draft of this poem, so any replies regarding how I could make it better would be VERY appreciated! Thanx! (P.S. I can't write poems!) Also, ...

(sorry that the paragraphs aren't indented!) One does not truly believe until they see, and what they see isn't necessarily readily accepted. It's human nature not to fear what we ...

The beginning of this was awesome! Had me in suspense the entire time. Love the style as well, it's different. Keep writing, it seems like this will make an excellent ...

This has definitely interesting subject matter and is full of details that help you understand the severity of the story, so I commend you on that. However, it seems to ...